Comments : Mirage of Emotions

  • 4 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben

      Thanks you dearest Dags ;)

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    So lovely, so sad and melancholy. This love of your dreams is only always in your dreams. Well done-

  • 3 months ago

    by Hellon

    This is very beautiful Ben...I hope I still have time to nominate it :) Just some thoughts...

    Within
    that hope
    my future is entwined
    with a melancholy that
    seeps
    from
    dream
    to
    reality.

    I'm wondering what it would look like if you took the word seeps and dropped it down letter for letter rather than what you've done here...not sure...maybe try it out yourself?

    as my sepulchre ...this got stuck in my throat a bit...I didn't find the word very poetic I'm afraid.

    Still...loved it..

    EDIT

    Bummer...just realised it's now 'too old to be nominated'.