Comments : Unrequited Love

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Milly, how clever this is! I was heading a totally different thought and you threw a loop in there. Well done-

    • 7 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Brenda :) I wanted to inject a bit of humour lol

  • 7 months ago

    by Michael

    Oh Miss Milly :)

    what a clever piece of writing. I was so involved way before you hit me with the end. Brilliant lady and very glad to see this pesky piece nominated
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thank you Michael you really are lovely man love and best wishes Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    Very interesting and well laid out Milly I have to say I wasn't expecting that :)

    All the best xx

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yay, Milly! That was unexpected! Clever and fun, you pull humor effortlessly.

    • 7 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Mossy. I'm glad you thought it was humerous. I was trying for something unusual and funny :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is so fantastic!! Completely unexpected punch line! This had me laughing so much. Clever write well done.

    • 7 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Jon, for your lovely comments. really glad it made you laugh :) best wishes Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thank you so much Dagmar for the nomination it really made my day :) much love Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by Hellon

    Haha! totally unexpected ending had me laughing my head off....absolutely priceless!

    • 7 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Hellon, I'm really pleased that it made you laugh. It's some times hard to gauge humour lol

  • 7 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    A fabulous rhyme scheme and agreed with everyone a very unexpected yet funny ending well done

  • 4 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Very funny, Milly.
    Like the other comments, the punch line was unexpected, which is how comedy writes should be. I like humour, you know that and I appreciated this wonderfully paced write.

    Thank you x

    • 4 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Michael. I like writing comedy but have to be in the right frame of mind lol. Really glad you liked it :) Milly x

  • 1 week ago

    by P o e m e l o

    I just recently signed in a month ago and look what i missed ? I enjoyed reading this until the end. And like others, I was amazed by the ending, so beautiful. Added to my favorites.

    • 1 week ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you so much Poemelo Its lovely to know its being still read and that you enjoyed it. Made my day :) all my best wishes Milly x