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Oh Milly, how clever this is! I was heading a totally different thought and you threw a loop in there. Well done-
by Milly Hayward
Thank you Brenda :) I wanted to inject a bit of humour lol
Oh Miss Milly :)
what a clever piece of writing. I was so involved way before you hit me with the end. Brilliant lady and very glad to see this pesky piece nominated
Thank you Michael you really are lovely man love and best wishes Milly x
Very interesting and well laid out Milly I have to say I wasn't expecting that :)
All the best xx
Thank you Em xx
Yay, Milly! That was unexpected! Clever and fun, you pull humor effortlessly.
Thank you Mossy. I'm glad you thought it was humerous. I was trying for something unusual and funny :)
by Lemon Squeezy
This is so fantastic!! Completely unexpected punch line! This had me laughing so much. Clever write well done.
Thank you Jon, for your lovely comments. really glad it made you laugh :) best wishes Milly x
Thank you so much Dagmar for the nomination it really made my day :) much love Milly x
Haha! totally unexpected ending had me laughing my head off....absolutely priceless!
Thanks Hellon, I'm really pleased that it made you laugh. It's some times hard to gauge humour lol
by Em (marmite)
A fabulous rhyme scheme and agreed with everyone a very unexpected yet funny ending well done
by - Mr. Darcy
Very funny, Milly.
Like the other comments, the punch line was unexpected, which is how comedy writes should be. I like humour, you know that and I appreciated this wonderfully paced write.
Thank you x
Thank you Michael. I like writing comedy but have to be in the right frame of mind lol. Really glad you liked it :) Milly x
by P o e m e l o
I just recently signed in a month ago and look what i missed ? I enjoyed reading this until the end. And like others, I was amazed by the ending, so beautiful. Added to my favorites.
Thank you so much Poemelo Its lovely to know its being still read and that you enjoyed it. Made my day :) all my best wishes Milly x