Comments : I am NOT just another girl...

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Miss Ren,

    Say it how it is and let them know it! A passionate and raw piece, with such a flow of sadness.

    Much love and warmth lady
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much dear Michael!! Much love to you <3

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, dear Cowgirl. I really can't press the like button for this one. I am so sad for whatever happened. Now it's my turn to say hang in there, this is temporary and things will get clearer and better for you or for that person you are refering to. And even if things like that happen...there are always reasons and purposes. Just let it all out. Things will be better, and always remember I am here.

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      So many hugs and so much love to you sweet Lady! I truly appreciate you. Thank you for the kind words and love <3 you're awesome!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ren,
    This is seething with anger, frustration and even a little remorse thrown in, perhaps.
    It's never easy when someone we know we have helped so much treats us so flippantly. I am sorry to hear - if literal - you've gone through this.

    All the best

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Ben :) I really appreciate your kind words. Take care!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I wish this had been nominated and if it was had received some recognition atleast because this really pulls me in and would be something I would say to certain people or a certain person anyway a fabulous piece filled with emotion.
    Take care x

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Sweet Em :) I really appreciate it. Take care hon <3

  • 6 years ago

    by jason

    This poem, like many of yours I have read, is very good. I actually wanted to say something more profound, but the word I am looking for I currently can not find.

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Jason for reading and commenting :) I appreciate it!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    Hell hath no fury...

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Damn straight.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ren, I know this is 5 months or so in the past, but poetry immortalises memories and events, doesn't it?
    I liked, not only the powerful wording that conveyed the hurt, but the layout of piece. This, for me, added to the raw, yet controlled, on the very edge of an explosion...

    I take it from your latest poem, all is on the mend. I do hope so.

    Take care,
    Michael x

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Michael!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. That's the thing about life though isn't it? We are either basking in its bliss or binding the wounds it leaves behind. Always on the mend...well...trying to be at least :) thanks again!!

      Take care!

  • 5 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I just saw this Ren.. hell hath no fury right.. i also feel like saying to quite a few people. :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Oh yes lol I feel you girl. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! :)