To my Valentine (Milly's thread)

by mossgirl19   Feb 9, 2018


When your soft lips brush against mine, it's like the setting sun kisses the ashen blue horizon giving birth to a dandelion skyline.

It's a moment that always takes my breath away.

I never found my individuality
until I tumbled into your loving arms and wrestled in your weight against mine.

The magic and mystery of two people becoming one-
It never fails to take my breath away.

And I know for another thousand times...

You will always take my breath away. 

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  • 5 years ago

    by RustySoul

    A blend of love and sensuality. Great work!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi.

    the imagery in your first line is both sensual and evocative. Your sentiments of the magic and mystery of two people becoming one, is one I share. Just like the sun heart slowing descending onto the cooling blue ocean. I like too, the explosion of thousands of dandelion seeds - an exquisite way to describe the climax of love.

    Most enjoyable.

  • 5 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Your work always takes my breath away

  • 6 years ago

    by Bleu

    Wonderful!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I have no idea which line to pick out as a favorite
    because they are all so tender and passionately written.
    In this short verse there is a fire and I like the image!
    Well done!

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