To my Valentine (Milly's thread)

by mossgirl19   Feb 9, 2018


When your soft lips brush against mine, it's like the setting sun kisses the ashen blue horizon giving birth to a dandelion skyline.

It's a moment that always takes my breath away.

I never found my individuality
until I tumbled into your loving arms and wrestled in your weight against mine.

The magic and mystery of two people becoming one-
It never fails to take my breath away.

And I know for another thousand times...

You will always take my breath away. 

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  • 2 weeks ago

    by RustySoul

    A blend of love and sensuality. Great work!!

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi.

    the imagery in your first line is both sensual and evocative. Your sentiments of the magic and mystery of two people becoming one, is one I share. Just like the sun heart slowing descending onto the cooling blue ocean. I like too, the explosion of thousands of dandelion seeds - an exquisite way to describe the climax of love.

    Most enjoyable.

  • 1 month ago

    by Fredy

    Your work always takes my breath away

  • 3 months ago

    by Hales

    Wonderful!!

  • 4 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    I have no idea which line to pick out as a favorite
    because they are all so tender and passionately written.
    In this short verse there is a fire and I like the image!
    Well done!

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