I love the purity of this, and also how you have found your sense of self and individuality, not lost it. I think that's equally important. Balancing one another's weight without compromising who each of you stand for. Very sweet poem in its simplicity and strength of heart. It seems few can define the true beauty and wonder of two people becoming one and growing, as one...
I loved this poem when you published it on the Valentines Thread and it is beautiful. I know the breath taking away feeling of being in love and I am so glad that you do too. Its a lovely romantic read. All my best wishes Milly x
4 months ago
It is lovely to see that love exists in such a beautiful and special way.
the imagery in your first line is both sensual and evocative. Your sentiments of the magic and mystery of two people becoming one, is one I share. Just like the sun heart slowing descending onto the cooling blue ocean. I like too, the explosion of thousands of dandelion seeds - an exquisite way to describe the climax of love.