Comments : And Froze

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, wow amazing write. So sad and it just punched you in the gut. Well done-

  • 4 months ago

    by Sinners gospel

    Ben, your writing style is eternal!

  • 4 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh Ben! Love your poems and this one feels a bit like unrequited love? Or maybe losing a love to death at the end of a long life (winters breath)?
    What I really love is that your writes aren't always obvious (like mine ... no reading between the lines required, lol) I really have to think about yours. Love the thinky stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      It was the latter version of events here, Kitty: losing a partner at the end. But you're right - sometimes I don't even know what I'm on about!

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben

    Ben .......well.....may as well just give up *throws pen in air*

    Nothing short of brilliant......damn.

    all the best fella

    Ben

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Ben, our writing is so different (on the whole) and you write the kind of romantic flowing free verse that I dream of being able to write.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    The kind of brevity that leaves an imprint, Ben. The impact of this one is great.

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful another perfect write. You have this wonderful ability to make even the fewest of words speak volumes. Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    An excellent piece as always Mr P

  • 3 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    Short & sweet but says so much more .. Excellent peice !