Comments : It's not you, it's me

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love really is a precarious game, isn't it?
    Kitty, your rhyming poetry is as smooth as water over glass.

    All the best as ever

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Indeed it is Ben! Thanks for your lovely comments :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty,
    A lovely rhyming piece as always, and I sense a wise-ness with your tail! :)
    Much love
    Michael

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Oh Michael, how I wish I was wise to love! Lol ... I'll let you know if I ever figure it out :-)
      Thanks so much :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    As always a lovely rhyming piece taking the opposite view on unrequited love. Glad to see it's been nominated love best wishes Milly x

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much lovely Milly. I was musing about how we often write about getting our hearts broken, but I'm sure we've all been the heart-breaker at some point or another ;-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Marmite

    What a fantastic piece

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Marmite I appreciate that :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Your heart is telling you and follow your inner instinct. I commend you for your honesty by letting that someone know. And believe me it is not easy. Emotions is something some people like to play with I prefer honesty. All the very best

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Dagmar, yes I prefer honesty too! :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by naaz

    Just as beautiful as the last poem of yours I read and couldn't stop myself from nominating it. This poem did that same thing to me once again.

    KCL, you write about different subjects, and hats off to you for your versatility, but my dear when you write love poems and especially the unrequited ones, they just hit me right in the heart.

    Obviously, One can't beat you in that, your rhyming is full on time. The language is so simple yet one can deeply felt all the emotions you poured out. I loved each line of every stanza but still my favorite is 'spring clean the cobwebs of me and throw open your doors' and this one 'my heart has a mind of its own'.

    KCL, every week you post around 3-4 poems. I just want to request you something, and I am not saying that you should quit your usual style, but could you please write at least one free verse every week.
    Actually after reading that line I just felt and imagined how it looked if it had been written in the free verse format. No pressure, only write if you feel comfortable.

    Kcl, for me, you create magic whenever you write about love or maybe I am in that age where love attracts me like a magnet.

    This poem tells us love any person in the world, truly-madly-deeply, but don't expect the same. That's what you try to portray or convey through this poem. He loved you, and he was a good person yet you never able to develop those feelings towards him.
    He still feels the same for you and you want him to move on which is a very good thing.

    I genuinely loved the magic you created, and please give a thought about my free verse request. For this poem...

    All the best!

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Naaz thank you so much for your kind words and nomination. I really appreciate it.

      I'll message you privately with regards to the style of poems you feel I ought to be writing.

      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Kitty, very beautiful poem about unrequited love.

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww...lovely but with a sad theme, Kitty. Loved your rhyming.

  • 5 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    The rhyming was spot on which made the poem flow elegantly.. Thought somewhat sad, the meaning behind it is powerful & sometimes letting go isn't a easy task. But you put it into a perspective that makes sense. (:

    Also, thank you for your lovely comment (:

    • 5 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much K, I appreciate that :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 3 weeks ago

    by William Mae

    Sometimes the feeling just comes up short. No wow factor, no deep stirring. You nailed the feelings and emotion of that in this write. Very well done.