Comments : That's where you are

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    hmm, this reminds me very much of the writing style of a young lady who is no longer with us on site, sadly, and who is much missed. I believe she was suffering from a family loss as well.
    Anyway, I am very sad to hear of your particular loss and I am glad that you can express it so well with such smooth rhyming and accomplished vocabulary.

    All the best and a warm welcome to the site,

    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Welcome to the site. A beautiful tribute to your Grandad. Best wishes Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Poems about loss are so so hard to read at times, youth's one was not so.

    Remembering the home things is the important thing. It's easy to dwell on the loss but if you can keep those memories of the home times it does make things easier (trust me I know).

    I particularly liked the ending. Reunited with loved ones we have lost! When my time comes I hope this is the way it will be

    Regards

    Craig

  • 7 months ago

    by Walter

    This is a very emotional and beautiful write.