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  • 4 months ago

    by Jamie

    This is a very sweet love poem. The rhyming is well done and i love the structure. 4 lines in 2 stanzas but they truly say what your feelings are. No lines are off topic and that to me is what makes a poem great, because it lets a reader feel what you are feeling.

    The first stanza talks about a person in your life that you seemingly have fallen in love with, but it reads deeper than that to me. Because of the first line here. It seems like you have been searching for love for a long time, so that tells me you have been hurt in the past. But you can breath a sigh of relief because you have found the one.

    The feelings of love are strong, because just with a kiss or a look they can make your heart flutter. That is beautiful.

    I love how the second stanza is a strong continuation of the first and it really does enhance my thoughts of a bad past and now it seems like you are finally moving on from it and finding love/living your life. We are all lucky when we find our saviors.

    Excellent write!

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful poem, M. If literal, you sound like a lucky person indeed.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Marmite. What a wonderful piece lovely rhyming and romantically themed this is an excellent piece in deed. You have captured beautifully the best things about being in love. Best wishes Milly x