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I think this is beautiful .
by Em (marmite)
This is so swoon worthy....I felt your longing for what was, what is no longer, what you wish is now. This write flows like water, just beautiful.
Another incredible piece from you, a true joy to read, with your heart and emotions displayed for a loved one.
Penned wonderfully my friend
by Sinners gospel
Big thanks to kush queen, Em, Brenda and Michael for giving their time to comment on my poem.
by Kitty Cat Lady
"a heart in exile which cries only for you"
Brilliant line Shane in a beautiful, poignant piece :-) x
Just like Brenda said, this is SO swoon worthy! Stunning imagery and such a lovely, beautiful story of love. Wonderful job!
(<3)^love button has been clicked!
Thanks Ren and kitty for such kind words
Shane, this is again beautifully crafted but such a bittersweet content.
Shane, I'm in love with your poetry! I think I'll spend more time on your profile :)
P.S this is Nema, from my old account which I'll keep and leave the other one.