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a beautifully written sonnet with a feel of winter dying away maybe?
well done fella, you know my feelings about sonnets
by Ben Pickard
I certainly do, Michael, so thanks for reading.
by CJ Maleney
! BAM !
The man is deffo back. Mr Pickard has entered the building.Glad you decided to return dude or we wouldn't get to see the likes of this
by Milly Hayward
As always an awe inspiring beautiful write. Best wishes Milly x
Thanks as always, Milly
by Dagmar Wilson
Like I said before you never seem to amaze me and I am glad you are back. All the best Ben
Thank you, Dagmar
by Kitty Cat Lady
It can be hard not being thick-skinned Ben, but I'd rather feel every feeling fully than not at all.
Another beautifully crafted piece :-) x
I agree entirely, Kitty...sometimes
Your poem has a beautiful rhythm to it. The rhyme runs so smoothly and delicately.
My favourite line was this: "The wind will take my dreams with not a care."
Bleak, in a beautiful way.
Thank you so much, Nema
by Em (marmite)
Ben as always you have left me speechless
Thank again, Em