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by Kitty Cat Lady
Very very sweet Walter, although I think at that point I'd have said 'sod the dishes!' Lol.
I can picture the scene perfectly and your rhyming and flow are flawless :-) x
Thank you kindly Kitty and in reality yes! Lol...I don't think it would ever go this way. Still, I was trying to make a point that she was more important than any of my wants! x
Amazing job, Walter!
Thanks very much Mel :)
A sweet and romantic piece... and would have to agree with Kitty (lady's advice always worth noting :)
Nicely penned, well done
Thanks Michael and agreed...A woman's perspective is always important :)
This is heartwarming. Flawless rhyming with a beautiful messege.
Thank you Tony...I appreciate your comments.
by Em (marmite)
Walter one word stunning
Thanks so much Em
So sweetly romantic Walter....you got 4 stars from.me for doing the dishes lol...seriously, this was really done well.
Thanks Brenda...and yes, doing the dishes always seems to earn brownie points!
by Meena Krish
For a minute I thought it was going somewhere and
then...poof! A gentleman who helps out with the chores
does it so romantically now that deserves more then a star!
Liked the read..keep penning
Thanks Meena, your comment put a smile on my face :)