Comments : Scattered thoughts

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Tony

    First off you have great vocabulary. Second, gender was invented by society, you do you.

    The last stanza packed a punch, and resonated with me. My brother was terrified to come out, especially to me. But we're closer than ever.

    You have tallent.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Nee

    You have beautiful vocabulary! And the poem has a unique structure that I could hear it being performed in a crowd.
    That's very brave of you to write about. Wonderful piece!

    Write on!

  • 1 week ago

    by Hellon

    Know what deserve a capital "I" so own it can only be the victim if you allow it to happen...