I really love this, Michael! I'm not sure about why there is no punctuation, however, but I gotta say that lack of punctuation was actually the reason why it flows really well somehow.
I'd like to know whether there is some intentional syllable count to this so that in the end there is a visual shape for the poem, or is it just the way you wanted it to flow/look?

Wonderful piece!
Write on

Well I like the shape of this thing Michael! Lol. The lack of punctuation here is actually quite clever, as it forced me to read it more carefully. But also .... it speaks volumes in very few words of 'sizing someone up' ... that initial few glances of attraction. Fab write! :-) x
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Wonderful art - are your poems Michael.

Oh Michael, such a cool write. Loved the shape and your language in this, Made me sad too it was all for unrequited love. Well done-

Loved this Michael you've been on a real role with your fantastic poetry recently

Michael you are so creative and with your poems you always add beauty to our lives.

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