Comments : 4/12/16

  • 9 months ago

    by Tony

    "whose rivers run red
    with the kind of apocalyptic
    certainty that will squeeze my
    love into the very oblivion
    from which it came"

    I can tell you that this left me at a loss for words, which doesn't happen often. It's a truly breathtaking few lines.

  • 9 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Love the visuals...beautiful write x

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, this is just beautiful. Your visuals are stunning...well done my friend.

    • 9 months ago

      by Tony

      So happy to see this nominated

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Brenda and thank you for the nomination.

  • 9 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    As always fantastic imagery

  • 9 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh well look at you and all your greatness, flipping lovely!
    This is beautiful

  • 9 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ben, the start made me think this might be sweet and swoony, but then it turned a bit sad and dark ... as usual - you're playing fast and loose with our emotions and it's brilliant!
    I'm confused though by both the title and the poem in quotation marks? Did I miss something? :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Kitty, the title was the date I wrote it and the speech marks were just something that felt right at the time...all a bit random, really.

  • 9 months ago

    by Michael

    Ben
    You were obviously writing very well back then too!
    Nice one fella
    Michael :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Ben even the random words throw by you hit right on the target- our heart.

    Thanx for motivating me.

    • 9 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Sg - you need no motivation from me, but thank you so much anyway.

  • 9 months ago

    by Hope

    Beautiful....

  • 9 months ago

    by Ren

    (<3)^click!