Comments : The Nuns Drank Blood Given To You

  • 3 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ben! A dark and twisty write with such accusatory venom in the last line. I love the metaphors for a bleeding heart, but I'm at a loss to decipher the religious references, but this line ...
    "The aisle to the alter is altered"
    is brilliant!
    I look forward to enlightenment ;-) x
    =^.^=

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I don't really know how to enlighten you, Kitty - I just had these strange ideas and wrote, lol

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Fascinating write Ben. A lot of twisted thoughts in that head of yours lol. Well done-

  • 3 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I am yet again left speechless

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    Those last few lines say it all. Another excellent...dark...write by you, Ben!