Comments : Change the World

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Love the unique rhyme scheme in this Tony and
    "8 want to change the whole world
    For this girl that I know
    Remove her heartache
    With the chill of the snow"
    ^^
    this says it all

    Take care

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Thanks Em, things are going good
      : )

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Tony,

    I feel your poem helps with your cause, if only we could change the world. I have often wondered if we could change to our individual way, we could invite others to experience what we actually mean
    nicely done fella
    Michael :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Thanks Michael,

      I look around me sometimes and don't recognise the world I grew up in. I used to ride my bike to school in 2nd grade, and I could not even begin to imagine my daughter doing that. Its sad.

  • 6 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crikey Tony! This is ace :-)
    The first three stanzas make you a mind reader frankly and you convey all of those things. And the rest is so poignant and heartfelt. Just brilliant. Really. :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Oh, I WISH I was a mind reader lol, would make things so much easier.