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by Em (marmite)
Love the unique rhyme scheme in this Tony and
"8 want to change the whole world
For this girl that I know
Remove her heartache
With the chill of the snow"
this says it all
Thanks Em, things are going good
I feel your poem helps with your cause, if only we could change the world. I have often wondered if we could change to our individual way, we could invite others to experience what we actually mean
nicely done fella
I look around me sometimes and don't recognise the world I grew up in. I used to ride my bike to school in 2nd grade, and I could not even begin to imagine my daughter doing that. Its sad.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Crikey Tony! This is ace :-)
The first three stanzas make you a mind reader frankly and you convey all of those things. And the rest is so poignant and heartfelt. Just brilliant. Really. :-) x
Oh, I WISH I was a mind reader lol, would make things so much easier.