Mental barriers

by Em (marmite)   Mar 8, 2018

This mind of mine;
mine precisely; is imprisoned
imprisoned by lack
lack of self esteem
esteem low
low self respect
respect is earned
earned from others
others who hurt
hurt you with no thoughts
thoughts for feelings
feelings which break souls
souls become fragile

fragile minds

minds imprisoned



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  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    A strong, interesting format, with even stronger emotions!! So many hugs to you, Sweet Em <3 remember, you're amazing!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Love the format Em! So true, those imprisoning mental barriers.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    great write here, albeit filled with saddened times

    Much warmth
    Michael :)x

  • 1 year ago

    by C Cattaway

    Definitely agree with Kitty. Great movement with each line.
    Well done.
    Catherine x

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    So emotional Em and feels like an exercise of word association that works brilliantly in this format. Very clever! Sending hugs xx

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      I can only agree with Kitty, Em! What a unique structure and it worked out great. I love it.

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