Comments : I once fell in love

  • 6 years ago

    by CânnâBîsh

    I love the repetition in this as well as the comparisons . a lovely peice with such open emotion .

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Powerfully graphic and bloody and painful, just like a broken heart feels. Well done on a beautiful yet sad write.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its raw and vivid! The reader along with the writer
    spirals into this scene and feels every inch and pain of
    love and love lost, like been pushed from the height
    of joy to the depths of sadness...

    A painful experience nicely penned...take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Well PM, this is fab! The poem reminds me of the title of a book I love called "love and other near death experiences" ... the way you've so vividly described the broken heart is brilliant, and you've made the point about it feeling like a physical injury perfectly. A fantastic write! :-) x
    =^.^=