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by Acoustic Odyssey Mar 21, 2018
Love, romance /
i love you
In this moment
as the sun sneaks behind the trees
pretending not to watch
you knit your fingers
by Poet on the Piano
Beautifully intimate and I love how the brevity here captures that moment, yet doesn't give so much to the reader. I like the emphasis of "...stay", that small simple plea. That desire.
lovely little piece and clever
This really is quite lovely. It gave us a sneak peek into a budding romance. Well done-
Awe...you took me into your special moment and let me share it with you but...what happened afterwards you keep to yourself as you should. Very simple..not sugar coated or " pink ribbony" just, well lovely really...
by Phoenix ¥
I love the simplicity of this beautiful and evocative poem which mixes landscape and emotion so well
by Scott Cole
by CJ Maleney