Comments : A Transient Love

  • 5 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I really liked your poem and could relate to it’s hearfelt sentiments. Beautifully rhymed, well done x

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Hellon , You are the goddess of poetry!

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wonderful writing, Hellon.

    Tears, so many tears, like the showers here in England this April.

    Is there a tune for these lyrics? Can I listen to your dulcet tones?

    Take care.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    A very well rhymed piece which got me singing along because it felt like a song especially with the repetition
    Edit: kind of missed the *my attempt at lyrics * haha