Pieces

by Matt Carroll   Apr 3, 2018


Bleeding hearts and hollow eyes
Splintered souls and stifled cries
Oh my, how I've come to despise
The carelessness within your lies

I'm sure for you, that time just flies
It matters not what this implies
It's true, that you don't hear my sighs
As another piece of me just dies

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  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Great flow in the 1st verse, Matt. May I offer a suggestion for the last line - I feel this may help with the flow:

    "as another piece of me just dies"

    Take care

    • 7 months ago

      by Matt Carroll

      Thank you for your comment, and the suggestion!

  • 7 months ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Well rhymed Matt x

    • 7 months ago

      by Matt Carroll

      Thank you! Just one of those random thoughts I had that I decided to write down.

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