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by Phoenix ¥
Well rhymed Matt x
by Matt Carroll
Thank you! Just one of those random thoughts I had that I decided to write down.
by - Mr. Darcy
Great flow in the 1st verse, Matt. May I offer a suggestion for the last line - I feel this may help with the flow:
"as another piece of me just dies"
Thank you for your comment, and the suggestion!