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Mr D :)
At the same time I posted - spooky, anyway I loved this on the thread and my mind has not changed. Brilliant, now I understand a little more (I think) :)
Michael, another amazing Rondeau! I love the love theme here-just beautiful!
This was just lovely Michael. I'd like to thank you for all the help you give in the thread. I think everyone enjoyed themselves.
by - Mr. Darcy
No, we should thank you Hellon for showing this site how to be a community of writers, all sharing and learning together.
by Kitty Cat Lady
Sad and swoony Michael ... packaged in a beautiful Rondeau :-) The punctuation OCD side of me wants to see a question mark after your question though ... :-) x
To be honest, I did not want to clutter the poem with punctuation marks - I think question marks are the most untidy of the lot! lol
by Ben Pickard
Love this, Michael. All I would say is that in line 8 you seem to lose a syllable. However, the ellipsis makes up for it with pause, to a certain extent.
thanks, Ben. I did think of placing an 'oh, where are you...' but I rather like the idea of being lost for words.
Fully deserved, good fellow - well done.
by Sinners gospel