Dancing Rainbows (Palidrome)

by Hellon   Apr 11, 2018


Winter
cold and frosty mornings
shimmering jewels clinging
reflecting prisms
scattered patterns hazy
dancing rainbows
enchanting

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enchanting
rainbows dancing
hazy patterns scattered
prisms reflecting
clinging jewels shimmering
mornings frosty and cold
winter.

@Hellon 17th November 2007

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  • 5 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging Comment - Dancing Rainbows (Palidrome) by Hellon points 7 - this was one of the main poems this week which has been stuck in my head and I have read over and over again. The imagery, infact the whole piece, is sublime.

  • 5 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Judging comment:
    This week has been the hardest to judge - there have been so many wonderful gems of formed poetry! Hellon’s Palindrome is perfect in form and has as much meaning backwards as it does forwards. It paints a beautiful picture of a moment of nature, frozen in time. Icicles and the things that ice and frost do in nature are undeniably stunning, and this poem reflects that brilliantly and takes us right there. :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by yogi73

    Very clever. So quaint of full visions

  • 6 months ago

    by Mark

    Congrats!!

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats, Hellon!

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