connections (palidrome)

by Michael   Apr 12, 2018


light
shining and bright
delicately and beautiful
touching moon with
stars entwining colours
twinkling brings vision
all in all
share memories and

LOVE

and memories share
all in all
vision brings twinkling
colours entwining stars
with moon touching
beautiful and delicately
bright and shining
light

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  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, such a lovely Palindrome. It's delicately written and your visuals are so pretty. Well done-

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Fantastic Michael! Swoony and fantastic use of the form. :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Ah thank you Miss Kitty :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    Yup...you've nailed this one Michael...you had it right straight up but...just needed a wee tweak which you done...nice job!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Hellon, lovely comments (shame about my head haha)
      Much love
      Michael :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Heaven knows how people write these things, Michael...hence my avoidance of that thread like the darn plague! I'm still building up to giving it a crack.

    Anyhow, this is marvellous.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Ben, certainly a challenge of ones poetic mind

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