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by Ben Pickard
Yep, this certainly is a dark one, Tony. Great imagery throughout though and your rhyming is always good.
Just a quick pointer to line 4 - 'none'.
Take care and all the best as ever,
Thanks for that catch Ben
by Kitty Cat Lady
Did I dictate my nightmare to you? Sounds a lot like being buried alive might feel and you've captured that so well! :-) x
Who said I was dreaming? Lol
oh, I could feel those tendrils creep from your words into me. it's cold and chilling. x_x
My mind just goes there sometimes. Or maybe it never leaves? It's hard to tell these days
Love this! So dark but beautiful. You have such great talent ! ;)