Comments : Tendrils of Darkness

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yep, this certainly is a dark one, Tony. Great imagery throughout though and your rhyming is always good.
    Just a quick pointer to line 4 - 'none'.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Thanks for that catch Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Did I dictate my nightmare to you? Sounds a lot like being buried alive might feel and you've captured that so well! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Who said I was dreaming? Lol
      ; )

  • 6 months ago

    by gumshuda

    oh, I could feel those tendrils creep from your words into me. it's cold and chilling. x_x

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      My mind just goes there sometimes. Or maybe it never leaves? It's hard to tell these days

  • 6 months ago

    by Brise

    Love this! So dark but beautiful. You have such great talent ! ;)

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Thanks Brise.