Comments : Heart's Carbuncle (etheree)

  • 8 months ago

    by Hope

    beautifully written, one way to put heartbreak.

  • 8 months ago

    by Michael

    Well done on this Ben
    M :)

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, as always you pull a formed piece with your usual flair to perfection-well done my friend-

  • 8 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh carbuncle! Don't ask why but I love this word (I wouldn't actually want one though!) The context you've used it in, and the flawless form too make this a fab poem Ben! :-) x

  • 8 months ago

    by Hellon always you have come up with the goods and they are perfect so I can't fault anything in this verse but....were's you palidrome man...I know it's in there somewhere....

    • 8 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks so much, Hellon, but that palidrome has me all...well...confuddled!

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    You've done yourself proud, Ben. I'm glad this is already nominated. Good luck.