by Em (marmite)   Apr 14, 2018

begged for
as you laughed at
my emotions seep
through my freezing souls core.
You showed no mercy when I
got on bended knee, screaming blue
murder for all I was worth that night,
for my pleas fell on deaf ears. Control freak.


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  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Em, great job.

    Why do certain, insecure people decide to control a gentle soul? I feel it is because they in their lives have been controlled, probably by their mothers.

    One of the amazing things I find with this form, and others too, like an, acrostic, is they give words to ones subconscious. I find that when I start I am not entirely sure what I am going to write, it is like I am possessed!

    Take care, Em x

  • 1 year ago

    by gumshuda

    Wonderfully marvelous.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An etheree with a very personal subject. Well done on this, Em.


  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Well done Em! I love how you used this form to put out such a strong write-hugs girl!

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    This is great Em,
    so this is an 'Etheree' by the count of syllables and lines?
    fab job lady

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