Comments : Searching For a Dream

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    ....evening rains have a way to make all things perfect
    and love-able especially when shared with the one you love.
    So detailed and vivid just to find out its all a dream but a
    beautiful and smiley one...lovely read :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats on the HM! :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Lost One

    Great flow and well rhymed. Change "enter laced" to "interlaced" in line 6

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Just stopped by to read it again and to
    see if you have posted anything new...