Comments : Angles.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wow -

    Reading this made me feel for this tortured person and for the love, willing them to find the strength to make it back.

    This poem shows wisdom and skill that many a more experienced writer would envy. Yes, including me!

    Excellent!

    p.s did you mean to title the poem 'angles' or 'angels' I guess either word could work?

    • 5 years ago

      by Rosy Cheeks And Irony

      Thank you so much for such wonderful feedback x the title was intended to be "angles" because it reflects the way one looks at life. If someone looks at life in a negative light then life is going to be a struggle. But if you switch your perspective then things will become better for yourself and the people around you

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderfully written poem that I enjoyed thoroughly.
    Thanks for posting and all the best,

    Ben