A STELLA EVENT (HAIKU)

by CRAFTY KEN   Apr 29, 2018


A STELLA EVENT (HAIKU)

Brightness filled the void
Darkness forever destroyed
A Universe Born

    report violation
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  • 5 years ago

    by Khadz

    I am so surprise to read your composition, it’s exactly relate to my poem darkness and God together !! Love the whole idea Mr. Ken amazing words and amazing read :) straight to my fav !

    Cheers
    KHADZ

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Ken,

    I like the haiku form. I do think though that your haiku would benefit if you replaced the uppercase letters to lowercase.

    As for the poem - the Big Bang must have been ' a Stella event'
    ^
    Ken, please ignore this suggestion. I have just noticed this is how you present a lot of your poems.

    • 5 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Mr. Darcy, to tell the truth I was unsure whether to use the Capitals or not.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ken, what a perfect little piece of formed poetry this is from you and a true testament to your unwavering faith.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Ben, this was uncharted territory for me.

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