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by CRAFTY KEN Apr 29, 2018
Life, society /
A STELLA EVENT (HAIKU)
Brightness filled the void
Darkness forever destroyed
A Universe Born
I am so surprise to read your composition, it’s exactly relate to my poem darkness and God together !! Love the whole idea Mr. Ken amazing words and amazing read :) straight to my fav !
by - Mr. Darcy
I like the haiku form. I do think though that your haiku would benefit if you replaced the uppercase letters to lowercase.
As for the poem - the Big Bang must have been ' a Stella event'
Ken, please ignore this suggestion. I have just noticed this is how you present a lot of your poems.
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks Mr. Darcy, to tell the truth I was unsure whether to use the Capitals or not.
by Ben Pickard
Ken, what a perfect little piece of formed poetry this is from you and a true testament to your unwavering faith.
All the best as ever,
Thanks Ben, this was uncharted territory for me.
by Em (marmite)
by Kitty Cat Lady