Comments : Bubble

  • 5 years ago

    by Brise

    I enjoyed reading this poem, the metaphor you use to describe love in a bubble is perfect, love is so fragile sometimes it does feel like a bubble it'll eventually pop. Great imagery, I enjoy reading your poems :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks Brise! x I did have the word fragile in my original draft for precisely that reason - I should have kept it in! Take care and thanks for commenting xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliant metaphors for this sad piece Phoenix. If only your heart could let go of this love that cannot ever be, allowing you to find your true love that's waiting for you out there. Hugs :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 5 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks Kitty - you’ve hit the nail on the head with letting go - I do struggle with that, especially with ‘the love that cannot be’ - I like that line.
      Great comments, as always xx