Comments : Conflict

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I wanted to do more with this but it was one of those that I just couldn't wrap my head around so you get it in its basic format.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    No matter the sight, the environment or a little object
    no matter how insignificant it is, everything about them reminds
    you of the person who is in your heart. It maybe mundane things
    but it all leads to the person whom you miss very much...keep
    penning my friend :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Craig,

    I wasn't sure about the end, as just read your BBQ one. But I am so pleased that this had such an ending, as it showed a lovely line of emotion
    Well done

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I wasn't sure about the whole thing to be honest. But it's sat in drafts long enough so figured I would float it.

    Like your honesty dude.

    Regards

    Craig

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I liked this very much. It is a thought provoking piece and I think that the last couple of lines really sums up the conflict. Definitely worth publishing it. Milly x