Comments : Freewrites, yet not free from you.

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Mary Anne, I really liked this a lot. You always write so openly, I really appreciate that. Your visuals were so beautifully descriptive, it's very telling. Thank you for sharing this-hugs-

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    delectable

  • 7 months ago

    by Tony

    Well written, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Superb imagery. A captivating piece that had me hooked from "My Airwalks are the color of a cotton candy sky, and I ache for days where I felt powerful enough to fly". Really a very enjoyable read with wonderful metaphors that grip the imagination. Milly x

  • 6 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on a well deserved win. Milly x

  • 6 months ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful win!

  • 6 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is absolutely a one of those reads where it
    hits the reader with an impact. So vivid and I like how
    you take the reader along with you entwined with your
    thoughts, feelings and reality...truly a touching write
    yet beautifully penned.

    Congrats on the Win!

  • 6 months ago

    by mistake

    Very vivid images and feelings are conjured in me by this. Really enjoyed reading it and being transported into a sniper of life.

  • 5 months ago

    by Tony

    Judge's Comment

    With metaphors and similes as kindling, this freeform burns with truth and honesty. She tells us about her world, as she sees it. The quiet girl at the library who doesn't talk, and who would notice? It's the library! A mother who feels for her child. A father who can't hide his feelings. She's in her safe place sipping coffee and, in her own way... She's letting us in.