Making frozen waterfalls

by Em (marmite)   May 15, 2018


Tears form icicles in my eyes
as I listen to more of your lies
always adding to my demise
but unanswered go my cries
as you leave; no goodbyes.

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  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this Em. Very well done on an excellent rhyming piece with superb metaphors. Very well deserved nomination. Milly x

  • 5 months ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Love the simplicity of this poem with great use of metaphor . Well done x

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Excellent, Em x

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Em,

    Written in your true way of expressing. A sad and chilly piece
    but a nice little piece of writing
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben

    Em Em Em. ....you have a wonderful way of penning emotions so vividly, regardless if happy or sad you always hit the nail on the head.

    freaking little epic

    Ben x

    • 5 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      I second the motion! Glad it is already nominated!

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