Comments : Writers (shadow sonnet)

  • 1 week ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Hi Michael such amazing words and I truly wished that people could and would follow. Take care and all the best

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great stuff, Michael. I keep promising myself that I will give this form a go but end up conveniently avoiding it!

    Take care.

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      You will Ben at some point, and thanks fella :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, niiiiiccccceeeeee.....you have more guts to undertake this than me, lol...a good solid message in this write also.

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Ah thank you Miss Brenda :)x
      and for your niiiicccceee nomination

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben

    Michael me old fruit this is exceptional, your forms is impeccable and it's content couldn't be truer. ..If I had my nominations back I would nominate but I'm still on "newbie" status lol

    nice work fella

    Ben

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben, that's a fine compliment in itself fella. Much appreciated :)

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    ah, at last - a shadow I can ask in - ah

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Ah - ah! indeed Mr D

  • 1 week ago

    by Meena Krish

    First off let me say well done with the form Shadow Sonnet and
    the message within is something we all should try and follow.
    Now here is a form I need to have a go at! Well done!!

    Just a few things I would like to say and I hope you don't mind.
    This sentence:

    flow with the heart and writing will flow
    ^^this has only 9 syllabus instead of 10

    pain we will share and show others our pain
    ^^this actually has 11 syllabus because "our" if I'm not
    mistaken is 2 syllabus

    These are just a few and I hope I've not offended you or
    said anything wrong.

    Keep penning...take care

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank Meena, and not at all I appreciate your keen eye :)

      'our' is actually one syllable (thank goodness) and I have now added believe it or not an 'our' in that line of nine - now ten

      Thank you again :)x

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An excellent piece Michael with great technique in what is for most a difficult form. With a wonderful message to the world too. Loved it. Milly x

    • 1 week ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly :)x