Comments : A White City. First Draft.

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Really enjoyed this piece, and very well written.
    Just a small typo *meny bombs* - should be many?
    Well done
    Michael :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Khadz

    Lot of leisure to write long poems !
    Beautiful feelings of over flow emotions love the read :)

    Cheers
    Khadz