Comments : Feeling Freely

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I'll just leave this here... Nominated

  • 5 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Love how you enumerate negative things that happen in everyone... We just need to let go all of them and feel really free! Nice write!

    --- MKKK

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      lol ... thanks MKKK ... I'm FREEEEE!!! hahaha :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty,
    One of your special rhyming poems, that says a lot behind the scenes.
    the feeling of feeling 'frivolous and free' wonderful lady!

    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent, fluent piece, Kitty with some wonderful alliteration.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    As Ben pointed out, nice rhyme and alliteration. I also liked the meter - it made me nod like a Churchill dog! Lol x

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lol ... nice image! haha, thanks Mr D :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Freedom is often the hardest thing to gain, regardless of whether it be emotional or physical. Either thing is an emotional and turbulent battle.

    Sometimes freedom can be as much of a curse as it can be a cure. On reading this I think it is perhaps your cure.

    I loved the construction of this poem and the emotions it conveyed.

    I vaguely remember when you first joined us on PnQ. In such a short space of time your rhymes and skills in other areas have improved ten fold. You have always had the ability to convey things but now you are doing so flawlessly.

    Well In my humble opinion anyway.

    Keep it going

    Craig x

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw Craig, thanks so much for your lovely comments :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    To be finally free. I know that feeling and able to breathe again. Enjoyed reading and all the best to you

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lovely to hear from you Dagnar and thanks so much for your lovely comments :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    It feels wonderful doesn't it? To finally exhale and just ahhhhh....hugs!

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Feels fabitty fab Brenda! Thank you :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Wow! I love this poem. I was riding the waves if your words thinking ‘this is me’ so to have a happy ending was great ;-)
    Brilliant writing, well deserved nomination xx