i have a friend

by Bless_Poet   Jun 9, 2018


I have a friend whom my family have yet to meet
i so closed off, you'd think solitary confinement
am i to blame?
i always felt caged, confined by family aproval

but i have a friend
this is my disclosure
i let her in, she let me in
i have a friend!

she taught me to appreciate
i have a friend
the realisation that the solom fear
was the possibility of rejection of ME

I stand at the altitude of my choise
shouting
i have a friend!!

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  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A warm welcome to the site - keep writing,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Bless_Poet

      thank you for the warmest welcome.

  • 6 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello.
    The frustration is clear in this poem.
    I like the format and how it leads to a SHOUTING conclusion. A point well made.
    There are a few typos: approval / choice

    Take care.

    • 6 months ago

      by Bless_Poet

      thank you very much on this feedback, it is well appreciated.

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