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by Bless_Poet Jun 9, 2018
Friendship, family /
I have a friend whom my family have yet to meet
i so closed off, you'd think solitary confinement
am i to blame?
i always felt caged, confined by family aproval
but i have a friend
this is my disclosure
i let her in, she let me in
i have a friend!
she taught me to appreciate
i have a friend
the realisation that the solom fear
was the possibility of rejection of ME
I stand at the altitude of my choise
i have a friend!!
by Ben Pickard
A warm welcome to the site - keep writing,
thank you for the warmest welcome.
by - Mr. Darcy
The frustration is clear in this poem.
I like the format and how it leads to a SHOUTING conclusion. A point well made.
There are a few typos: approval / choice
thank you very much on this feedback, it is well appreciated.