Comments : I Long for the Sparrows Song

  • 1 week ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I LOVE THIS! I love the title, the referebece to swallows, autumn, summer, tatters, porcelain glass... I love how you worded this! The ending is superb! Well-written indeed! Going to my faves!

    --- MKKK

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks for cheering me up, Ben :(

    Seriously, a sad but beautifully written piece.

    Take care, good man.

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Ben, you have a lovely turn of phrase.
    Excellent work.

  • 1 week ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Amazing write. Thank you for sharing. All the very best to you.

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, a lovely heartbreaking write. I felt your sadness coming off this in waves. Well done - hugs!

  • 6 days ago

    by Ren

    Excuse me while I pick up the shattering pieces of my heart...

    Although sad, this is breathtakingly beautiful, as always, Ben.

    Love button has been clicked!! (<3)

    Much love and healing to you!