I adore your wording. & it is very sad how two people can drift apart so quick. Such a touching, emotional peice.

This hit home. Nominated. All the best

There is a genuine and unsettling sadness to this piece, Larry, not least because of how many people succumb to this deadly and silent assassin.

So true Larry. It can happen and you can be right there. Well done-

Oh Larry this is beautiful yet so very sad and definitely hit home for me too

So powerful in such few lines, Larry.

This is such an amazing and relatable poem. The way you captured the emotions of seeing someone you were once so close with drift away before you even realise what's happening is absolutely beautiful :)