Comments : Fade to Blue - Lost in the Sky

  • 6 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    I adore your wording. & it is very sad how two people can drift apart so quick. Such a touching, emotional peice.

  • 6 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This hit home. Nominated. All the best

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    There is a genuine and unsettling sadness to this piece, Larry, not least because of how many people succumb to this deadly and silent assassin.

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    So true Larry. It can happen and you can be right there. Well done-

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh Larry this is beautiful yet so very sad and definitely hit home for me too

  • 6 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    So powerful in such few lines, Larry.

  • 4 months ago

    by M.U.

    This is such an amazing and relatable poem. The way you captured the emotions of seeing someone you were once so close with drift away before you even realise what's happening is absolutely beautiful :)