Comments : It Means I Still Love You

  • 1 month ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I enjoyed the vivid imagery you used in this poem which so well describes the extremes of love and the pain of still loving somebtyou don’t want to.
    Great write x

    • 1 month ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Thank you, I wasnt sure if it made much sense. I'm glad to know you were able to imagine what I was trying to say.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ren

    "and they've migrated north to eat at the fabric of my fragile heart..."
    ^^
    Absolutely love that line!! Well done on a great write!