Comments : Swirling Into Beyond

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Nominated

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Cath,
    A lovely and romantic piece, with you heart flowing all the way through. A really up-lifting poem.
    Well done

    Michael :)x

    • 5 years ago

      by C Cattaway

      Thank you. I think it says what I wanted, though I'm still not sure.. :-( x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Catherine, you're such a wonderful storyteller. Love it :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 5 years ago

      by C Cattaway

      Thank you. I've lost it a little again, lately. We shall see what happens ;-) x

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I enjoyed this very much.
    I think if you removed the word 'coz' from the last stanza, it would improve the flow.

    Take care.

    • 5 years ago

      by C Cattaway

      Thank you. I over-use 'coz', because it holds a significance. It doesn't fit there, I can see, yet somehow it fits me.. :-) x