Comments : Soaring High

  • 5 years ago

    by Blank

    Beautiful, I love the end.
    "In this crowd of sinners".
    Very good.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    It is hard to find a place in the world when all around you is bad.
    Nominated.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Congrats!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win!!

  • 5 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on the win!

  • 5 years ago

    by Bless_Poet

    Wow, this poem is amazing.

  • 5 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    So brilliant. I have been wrestling this question myself of late. You have carved this into the most beautiful question.

  • 5 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    Oh, another beautiful poem about purpose - one's purpose in life; the ultimate purpose of life; the world's purpose in our own life. I somewhere along the lines, found all these questions in this short and crisp piece. Built on the foundations of sad imagery, the verses take me into a very different world than what the poet himself feels - does poetry only make the poets help realize and put together their thoughts and feelings, or somewhere do we as readers take bits and pieces from them too in our minds, or do they just end up like piled up newspapers - read, abandoned and forgotten in our cupboards. Thank you.