Comments : Subjective Reality

  • 1 month ago

    by Darren

    What a clever little poem, glad it was nominated

    • 1 month ago

      by Aegis

      I'm quite happy it managed to sneak into Maple's eyesight^_^ I was pretty proud of this one, kind of just spilled out through my fingers in a passing daydream I had. I appreciate your kind words:)

  • 1 month ago

    by Megan Chapman

    Love this!

    I love those that fall out almost fully formed ... as if "in a passing daydream.." Lovely work.

    • 1 month ago

      by Aegis

      Thanks!

  • 1 month ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm very happy I saw this!!!! love this poem!!!!!

    • 1 month ago

      by Aegis

      That means a lot to me^_^

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Great all through, but those last two lines are indeed 'haunting'. Fantastic! :-)
    =^.^=