Comments : One To Celebrate, Two To Drown

  • 4 months ago

    by Scott Cole

    Nice.........

  • 4 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A great piece of free verse Ben, I love the narrative feeling of your thoughts that add gravity to the content. Superb! :-) x

    =^.^=

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Kitty, Michael and Scott - thank you all.

  • 4 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Ben. This sounds frustrating, trying to grasp onto something that lies in the past. We often try to recreate that magic, but it's hard...

  • 4 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny
    This is simply stunning.. I will admit i shed a tear or two.. We all seem to hold onto the past in one way or another...
    Well done

  • 4 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Our past is something else. We can run but not hide. Very touching Ben. All the very best and thank you for sharing

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Amazing Ben! Glad to see this nominated.

  • 4 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ben,

    I dont drink, but several years ago, I was suffering from heart break and one night I drank a bottle of rum... while writing poetry and needless to say I didn't post what was written and I never will... awful stuff (the drink and the poems lol)
    but I relate to this piece and its very powerful!

  • 4 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Ben, always amazing.

  • 4 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Goodness gracious me.... That is all