Like a poem

by Phoenix ¥   Jul 9, 2018


If only life was like a poem
And the words we wrote came true.
We’d all be authors of own story
And I would live with you.

We’d have a bright, modern house
Maybe by the sea,
And spend all day together
Just you and me.

Money wouldn’t be a problem
We could please ourselves each day
The kids would all be happy
With endless time to play.

I’d always be in perfect health
Ready to do all the things I love
Me and you together
Fitting like a glove

But all poems need a good ending
And so do we.
Shall we write it ourselves?
If so....what’s it going to be?

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  • 5 years ago

    by Yan

    this is a truly beautiful poem. is so lovely and full of happiness. I really hope a happy ending is written feels so much like it should be X

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    I love your sentiment with this. Nicely rhymed also and flows beautifully.

    • 5 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks for the lovely comment Brenda - much appreciated xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Phoenix,

    Just a lovely rhyming piece from you, that really puts a smile on my face.
    Wonderful :)
    Michael

    • 5 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks Michael :-) your comment put a smile on mine too x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love this Phoenix! It's so wistful and you paint your ideals beautifully. Glad to see this nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful!

    • 5 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thank you! x

    • 5 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Hi I’ve just realised you have nominated my poem - thank you so much! xx

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