Comments : Shifts!

  • 4 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Catherine,

    I like this poem; it's like a snap shot into your world. The fact you've added rhyme and separated the poem into quatrains pleased me.

    Life's hard isn't it? Trying to squeeze quality time into a busy, often stressful life is not easy.

    Thankyou for sharing and I wish you every happiness. After all, there's always time for fun, right? X

  • 4 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Shift work can be hard on relationships, but you clearly have a winning attitude Catherine. A lovely rhyming poem that looks on the bright side :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Cath,

    a lovely piece, with rhyming that flows very well. The frustrations of shift work in relationships, never easy however you make it sound romantic here
    Well done and nominated
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely piece about managing love despite the difficulties of shift work. A well rhymed piece that definitely deserves the nomination. Milly x