Comments : Nightshift

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Oh yes, I like this. :0)
    Nominated

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow Miss Dagmar - this is Dagmar good! ;) albeit a sad theme, really love the way you weaved this one lady :)
    Hats off! and hugs
    Michael x

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Imagery is so vivid and the sadness just
    stands out...line by line it can be seen...it
    can be felt...take care

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Congratulations, Dagmar!

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Great win!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ren

    This gave me chills. Amazing job on a much deserved win! Congrats!

  • 5 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Congrats Dag on your deserved WIN!

  • 5 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    The imagery is vivid and each sentence very strong; the descriptions are dark pulling in the reader to notice the sadness and darkness in each and every word written. The Nightshift brought to me a sense of hell in a different way too when it mentioned a long hall way and fingerprints on the wall (of a certain kind of monster perhaps). Although really sad, it is beautifully written and portrays a level of strength in the writer to me to have been able to bring out feelings from inside onto paper.